I'm thinking about rebranding my query bait. I love the title, but all the feedback I get is pretty much "I think I've read this book before." I know they haven't, but I've been sort of selling it in a way that seemed familiar (a clear link to the looks like I've seen it before feeling). So I'm asking for help. I've come up with some secondary titles, so let me know what you think (feel free to email, if you don't want to comment).
The Settfyrian of Summer
Evil Wizards Taste Like Chicken
A Maelstrom of Magic
Okay, those don't look that great. Clearly, I have a lot of work ahead of me.